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Fallen Angel by ~moonlightjewel:iconmoonlightjewel:

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Yay, it's finally up!! It took me so long to draw!! I love it, even though her hand looks very weird O_o
She's so sad! But that was the point of the picture ^^;

I want to give her a name, I like her, so I'll probably draw her again xD i'll try to make her look happy the next time xD

Hmm, I feel like writing a story about her xD But I know I'll never really write it ^^;

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Mood: Zest *aniolmroku Oct 1, 2007, 8:39:24 AM
I like her face, especially eyes. And folds on her dress are drawn well.
But her feet looks strange...
And hand isn't "weird", it's just too small. :)
But anyway I like it. :D
:+fav: X3

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“I shut my eyes in order to see.”
/Paul Gauguin/
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~moonlightjewel Oct 1, 2007, 8:54:21 AM
Thanks for the fave :hug: Yeah, the hand is too small, the first time I drew it looked fine, but then i messed up, so I erased it and some how drew it smaller -__- Annoying ^^;
I'm very bad at drawing feet, at first I was thinking of cuttting the image so her feet wouldn't show, but I figured it would look bad.

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You dream of the end to start all over again
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*aniolmroku Oct 1, 2007, 9:02:18 AM
I understand, I used to have problems with feet and hands too, but as I've been practising more I don't have this problem now. I've been using a little trick: I've been making photos of my hand in needed position and then I've been drawing hands looking at this photos. Try this - it really works! :)

And sorry for my bad English ^^;.

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“I shut my eyes in order to see.”
/Paul Gauguin/
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~moonlightjewel Oct 1, 2007, 9:06:02 AM
Thanks! That's such a cool idea xDDD I'll definitely try it ^^
Your English is fine!

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You dream of the end to start all over again
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~artchloe Oct 1, 2007, 9:54:40 AM
i like her hair and her face looks so sad
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~Yoshi86 Oct 1, 2007, 10:13:25 AM
As aniolmroku said the hand isn't weird but small (arm and feet are as well, but yeah I've got problems with them too, so what am I talking...). A little more shading and even the pose of the hand could be believable.

And a little bit help again ;):

shoulder and carrier(?)...
At the moment the carrier makes the shoulder look pretty thin.
You can change it by giving the carrier a slight curve and lay open the point where breast, shoulder and arm run into another. Shade this point and it will look great.^^

Just don't get me wrong, you did a pretty nice job.:aww:

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What a caterpillar calls "End of life", a wise man calls "Butterfly"^^
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~pyromaniac0alchemist Oct 1, 2007, 11:20:11 AM
Nice Wings! =D

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Ohh pffft. I'm busy pimping my globe.
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